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Colorful Violence by ~BluFeuer:iconBluFeuer:



I want to die in hues of metal:

A black hole spitting silver

                       Splat!

          And just like that,

I'm

spilling liquid copper

Falling back,

my dreams are over

          Hair rippled out

like flakes of iron

My skin colored in

with light gray crayons

           My body turns

cold like steel

I believe this is how

death must feel

           Oh, until I join the dust

I think I'll die a metal statue

Oxidized green

saturated orange rust.
©2006-2009 ~BluFeuer
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Author's Comments

Not a good day today.

I usually bleed out poetry out of angst. Here's a few drops.

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:iconkoujigirl:
Awww... :hug: I hope ya feel better soon... I'm sorry for not having called, I miss you though!
:iconbakaako:
Awww Barbs.... I'm back in Iloilo now. I hope we can catch up on talk, neh? :hug:

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"The truth is incontrovertible. Panic may resent it, ignorance may deride it, malice may distort it, but there it is."
-Winston Churchill
:iconvans3n:
awww...

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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking up at the stars."
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